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Sunset Under Oceanside Pier

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And apparently this one was having trouble w/prints also. As such, it's been revisited as well.
Image size
4608x3456px 8.19 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX S6300
Shutter Speed
10/1600 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Jan 19, 2013, 5:46:36 AM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Vision-
I can see your idea here, the lighting through the beams creates a nice look against the water. It's pleasing.

Originality: I've seen similar photos before, and many done a little better. The angle is nice, but I feel like this is too centered and a little high. Try to keep the rule of thirds in mind.

Technique: The photo is grainy, and that detracts from the overall image. The sharp sunlight at the top is also distracting. Also, this is just a personal preference, but I think the one watermark is sufficient. dA's watermark is big and obtrusive. Your watermark in the corner is enough.

Impact: Overall, it's a nice shot and beautiful idea. With some improvement, a shot like this could really have a great impact, the concept is there though.